Welcome to Bengal Spider. Before proceeding read our content posting guidelines. I have checked your article. It's good. You have used too many same keywords (like Dal). No need to use same keyword for multiple times. Instead use some other keywords separated from what you used. Use proper heading and sub-heading tags. For this read some articles here and follow them.
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Thanks for your suggestion. I will keep in mind next time I write an article.